Broken Paths-revised
After going over this poem late last night, I came to realize that I am using a second person pronoun, you, not only as myself but also as the person to whom I am speaking to/of in this lyrical poem....
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Oh wow. This is wonderful, Twilight. Very poignant and beautifully written. ((HUGS))
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oh wow very intense i know those nighttime monsters bravo t Join Me Beneath The Stars at.... Poetic Constellations S.H. Sharp: "Words equal tricks; prose equals conjouring; poetry equals magic....
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{interpretive paraphrase}You're leaving this? No, I wanna know...you're leaving THIS?? oh wow!! I loved the strength of voice in this, dear poetess!! So awesomely rendered!
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WOW...this was so amazing.....truthfully. *my music molds me into me*
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blues rythms and power chorus! Ka-POW Baby! oh yes! Cat, you sing that warning sooo well!
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i have so been to this place you would not believe it.....excellent write....just excellent....so vivid....*applause* alexis
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Hi Cat, Cadence flows with such divine temperment of mood and soul in this one. Truly enjoyed the layout you carefully chose for this one to make its finale. At times those broken paths verge into...
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Hey Mireille! Thanks sweetie! After the revision, I hope you understand I am talking about myself in this, being the one who was left. The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Hey Steph! Thank you my friend, you're Most kind, and the thought is greatly appreciated! E'er, The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Quote:Hesitation, shouts into the night and strangles the moments with its hands Cat you, the single you, that is you adn not them.lol You really have penned a vary sharp piece of literature here....
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Well..I liked both versions TE, a (you don't know what you've got till it's gone) write. "Desperation with its cockeyed view turns the landscape a couple degrees" a standout line to me. Well done...
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Hey Dee, Thank You my friend, glad it left it's mark! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Hey Thomas! Thanks my friend! The nightmares are his I'm afraid! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Hey DPF! I'm the one that was left...he couldn't handle my illness, so instead of being by my side in ICU for months, he wandered away. Oh the degradation! I'm cool! The Dark Corner- Immortality...
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Hey Ali! Thanks sweetie! We r soulsister's to the god of Rock! Can I hear an 'AaaaaMen! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Thanks Alexis! Really?! It like SO sucks, don't it! Ah well, on to better things awaiting us beyond that mountain! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Thank You Gabby! Loved your response here girl, I am most thankful! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Hey Bryan! Thanks you my friend! I bled from the heart with this one baby, had to jot it down before the emotional tidal wave like, drowned my moment of righteous indignation! The Dark Corner-...
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Hey Sky!! Thanks ever so my friend! Ahhh what a rush of emotions will do for a pen in the night! The Dark Corner- Immortality Awakened, Feel the Pulse!
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Hi Cat, Hate that when it happens, someone departing out of your life when you are extremely ill. Those that are supposed to be there for you, depart, fly off, start another relationship or get all...
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